"I am mainly preoccupied with the world as I experience it, and at times when I would rather be dead the thought that I could never write another poem has so far stopped me. I think this is an ignoble attitude. I would rather die for love, but I haven't."
In love with You at Age 6
I think the lines should come out through the back (and open up) so there's a visual balance. But for now, this is fine.